i have a french progect that needs proofreading
if anyone out there is french or knows french could you please help?
Please ONLY in you know what you are doing.
i don't need no web pages cuase i don't like how they work,
merci becoup.
= )
Une journée à mon gôut
Je me réveille à 9h30 et descend à la cuisine. Ma mère prépare mon petit dejeuner favori- du crepes avec fromage, jambon, tomatoes et bacon ! Je monte à ma chambre, je me lave et prende mon vêtements favori. J'ai ecoute ma musique pendant je me peigne et je me maquille. J'ai telephone mes amies, et nous recontons à la rueille de bowling. Nous jouons de bowling tout le jou. Nous arrete un moment a mange un pizza avec un cola. Mais, dans la nuit nous allons à le cinema. Nous regardons un film de comédie. Je retourne chez moi et mange un peut de nourriture. Je me coucher a 11h, tres heureux !
heyy guys.
i have a french progect that needs proofreading
if anyone out there is french or knows french could you please help?
Please ONLY in you know what you are doing.
i don't need no web pages cuase i don't like how they work,
merci becoup.
= )
Une journée à mon gôut
Je me réveille à 9h30 et descend à la cuisine. Ma mère prépare mon petit dejeuner favori- du crepes avec fromage, jambon, tomatoes et bacon ! Je monte à ma chambre, je me lave et prende mon vêtements favori. J'ai ecoute ma musique pendant je me peigne et je me maquille. J'ai telephone mes amies, et nous recontons à la rueille de bowling. Nous jouons de bowling tout le jou. Nous arrete un moment a mange un pizza avec un cola. Mais, dans la nuit nous allons à le cinema. Nous regardons un film de comédie. Je retourne chez moi et mange un peut de nourriture. Je me coucher a 11h, tres heureux !
i'm descriving a favourite day.
in the present.
Rose T
I'm confused. Are you describing a day that happened or a day that you would like to have? You used present tense for some of the paragraph, and passe compose for part of it. You're also missing some accents, and "nous arrete" is conjugated improperly. I think "mange" should be "manger".
Eu Citizen
NEW REVISED VERSION TRANSLATED BY ME: Note in your new version you still do make several mistakes with grammar and spelling, just to warn ya.
Good luck.
I wake up at 9:30 and went down to the kitchen.
My mom made my favourite Breakfast-Crepes with cheese,Ham,Tomatoes and Bacon!
I go up to my room, i clean myself and i put on my favourite clothes. I listen to my music while i coumb myself and put my make up on.
I phone my friends and we meet at the bowling alley.
We Play (Bowl all day) all day. We stop for a bit to eat some pizza and drink some coke. But at night we go to the movies. we watch a comedy movie.
I back home and eat some food.
I go to sleep at 11 o'clock extremely happy.
bunncat
holy crap What's all this stuff about bacon ham cheese tomatoes pizzza movies and crepes? Your post made me hungry just reading it! Now for the English thing: first one should know how to spell in English first before asking questions. Cause('because'
) is not spelled cuase. Project is not spelled progect and your sentence is constructed wrong too. i.e. " I don't need no web pages cuase I dont like how they work". LASTLY isn't "thank you very much "actually spelled:
Merci beaucoup?? I highly recommend going to this site for French lessons: easy to understand.
PETER
O.K. I'm Dutch but I know this, very basic French, from my schooldays, 50 years ago:
I wake up at 9h30 (lazy!!) and go to the kitchen. My mother prepares my favourite breakfast - pancakes with cheese, ham, tomatoes and bacon. I go back to my room, wash myself and put on my favorite clothes. I listen to my favorite music while I comb my hair and apply my make-up. I call my friends and we'll meet at the bowling alley. We'll bowl all day (what a drag!!). We'll stop for a moment to eat a pizza with a coke. After that, at night, we'll go to the movies. We'll go and see a comedy. I'll go home and have some food. I'll go to sleep at 11h, very happy!
babarox1998
Une journée à mon goût (this accent ^ is on the "u")
Je me réveille à 9:30hrs et descend à la cuisine. Ma mère "me" prépare (to you) mon petit déjeuner favori:
des (plural form) crèpes avec "du" (pronoun) fromage, du jambon, des tomates et du bacon. Je monte à ma chambre, je me lave et "enfile" (better than prendre) mon vêtement (singular) favori. J'écoute (présent) ma musique préféré tout en me coiffant et me maquillant (rephrasing). Puis, je téléphone (présent) à mes amies (if you have boys friends, you would say "amis" ) Nous nous "rencontrons" dans la ruelle du bowling (salle de quilles in french). Nous jouons au bowling (quilles in french when your talking about the game)
toute la journée (the whole day). Nous arrêtons un moment pour manger une pizza (feminin) et boire un cola (or boisson gazeuse not necessarly a Coke...) Le soir (in the evening not in the night), nous allons au cinéma. Nous regardons une comédie (not necessary to say a "movie" because we know you're going to a movie theater to watch a movie...) Je retourne chez-moi et mange un peu (same as movie: not necessary to say food. We know that's what you're eating)
Je me couche à 11hrs, très heureuse (feminin, suppose you're a girl)
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Orignal From: French translation PLEASE and thank you- (no computer translations) !?
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