5/19/11

okay, trying to rhyme this thyme--giggles did i do it?

okay, trying to rhyme this thyme--giggles did i do it?For coffee I do pine
in brewing, takes it's time
cream, sugar; no. In time
you know I won't decline.

Have you figured me out?
without coffee I pout.
My feet are full of gout,
I love coffee, no doubt!

Some people call me Sam
I love that thing called ham
to eat it, well--I am
forbidden, what a scam!

So now my verse is through
I'd like to hear from you,
don't know if continue
I can. I will bid you, adieu!



This took about 8 minutes to write counting the time I used to dig out old dictionary to check spelling of adieu.

What say you?
Neon, you are right! I meant to drop adieu down and forgot. Yes, I could do without the ham stanza--just tossed it in for fun.
Jellz--thanks! I am glad you got the ham!!!!! giggles to ya!

DAHha Bring it on
This one rolls right out of the pot!

andre61
nice rhyme.

neonman
Perc, perc, perc
my heart says hurry
pot says not to worry
now get back to work
until the pot stops it's perc!

A fun read. Kept your beats right until the last line (unlike my answer!). You could drop adieu to a line below. The ham insert? Do you need that stanza?

*Jellz*
Neon! Everybody needs a lil Ham in their lives! Live a little....

Thanks Sam ! Light and bubbly and brew-tiful...

Giggles you done good!

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